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 Hi there! Just finished a sprite with Hay Lin and decided to show you. What do you think? Should I fix something?   

Привет привет! Только что закончил спрайт с Хай Лин. Решил показать вам, что думаете? Стоит что-то поправить? 



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Ranma( Matty)

Nice i am liking that nicely

Boris van den Berg

I don't really like the face to be honest.

Aronoks

неплохо

Saisaici

I like it, but could you mabye make her more skiny in the leg, butt, waist and chest. She look like a more beefy version of Hay Lin. And mabye make it so her hair behind her look like there are twin ponytails.

lol32

nope¡¡

Anonymous

Неплохо получилось, ну я думаю что было бы неплохо немного поменять прическу, с этой ее голова похожа на голову мальчика, ну а так даже неплохо! продолжай в том же духе!

Anonymous

She appears a bit too busty. Not an expert on the subject, but I would assume that she would have the smallest bosom of the guardians

Anonymous

looks great :)

Anonymous

May be a little bit more Frizzy hair?

unclefester84

Hmm, a bit skinnier maybe...

Darkwolf

Her facial appearance needs softening, I look at her and she seems a tad stiff. Hay Lin is supposed to appear rather bubbly pretty much all the time, the sprite doesn't really convey that to me as is.

Anonymous

the light hit her just right

Anonymous

Мне кажется или у нее одна грудь больше другой?

Mikael

I like it keep her as is

Anonymous

It doesn't look bad, but also doesn't seem to resemble the actual character very much (Her nose and eyebrows are much larger here, and her facial features don't really match the original... She doesn't really look Asian anymore, honestly, and she's less "petite" than she was in the cartoon).

Anonymous

Also, she just overall doesn't share the playful/mischievous look of the original.

Anonymous

Nose... Yeah. somethig is wrong with her nose

Anonymous

there is something in the neck and hair around it, that I just do not like, it may be a bit too long and the eyebrows I think should be a little thinner. For the rest, good work, this is great.

Anonymous

Good job but Hay Lin has more separate eyes and a smaller triangle nose.

Anonymous

Looks ready for a good dicking~

Anonymous

Если сравнивать с мультом, то она вроде как самая стройная из всех, а у вас получилась немного "сбитая-накаченная" что ли. Ну и лицо - брови по моему толстоваты, нос какой-то больно мужской-грубоватый, оттенок кожи слегка контрастирует с общим оттенком кожи(вроде желтоват что ли)?

Ronaldo garaway

The controls for the Android version

Anonymous

неплохо

Anonymous

Maybe smaller boobs? Just reduced by one size?