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Draconian Remnant 48 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-08-29 03:31:45
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2021-09-03 20:36:18
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A picnic in the forest.

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Pope Yoda I

Confucius say: "What is the sound of one hand fapping?" Turns out it's the next chapter in this awesome fic. Thank you once again!

Alice

That was a awesome chapter! One note, you had Jaunifer think that Sepper never showed up in the show but because he stopped watching before even Season 3 it may be more accurate to say didn't show up this early or that he never heard of her character or that she doesn't appear in the RWBY GRUPS book. Small thing but stuck with me enough to mention it. Thanks so much for the entertainment.

Pope Yoda I

It's interesting to see the protagonist reveal his lacking ability in strategy by making very poor long-term choices. He's on a literal death world where the main bad guy can Zerg Rush at will. No land war has ever been won by simply being "skilled.". He needs to start building a literal nuke, or learn how to modify his fire/magic into them, because I can already see the writing on the wall here. Might be a good idea to make simply up and leaving the world behind difficult to increase tension a bit. I'm surprised Jaune isn't more bloodthirsty towards Cinder, who is the canonical murder of Pyrrha, Amber, Beacon and most of Vale. I'd expect his instincts to be chomping at the bit to literally break her, body and soul, so the lack of that fire is very odd given how much you've played up his possessiveness. On that note, I expect Adam's death to be appropriately gruesome. Lastly, I kind of hope we see his family sometime soon. Jaune having to fake faunus characteristics being recessive traits would be pretty fun.

PublicLee Speaking
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2. She went after Pyrrha because Pyrrha was a Maiden. That's NOT HAPPENING this time. (Also can't make a list on my phone). 3. There's a bit of a pre-crime aspect to it, as she hasn't done anything yet, but given her status as an enemy combatant she should still be removed if possible. That means Jauncifer will act against her, but there's no real passion there, just cold practicality, since she hasn't gone after him and his for him to get offended/possessive over it.

Acrimonius

Seems once again that Jauncifer takes ‘emotional statement’ as ‘complete loss of freedom’. Not surprised. On a separate note, leave Team RWBY to suffer the consequences of their poor choices. They will never learn unless they experience it for themselves, and them not learning will only mean that more reasonable but empathetic people will keep getting forced to tag along with increasingly dangerous, risky actions.