Home Artists Posts Import Register

Downloads

Content

Sepper's Final, and a surprising discovery

Comments

Acrimonius

This character is both dangerously naive and a bit too submissive. If he is a ‘Dragon’, why does he just give fire/magic to Ozpin when he has been explicitly warned against underestimating or trusting him? He seems far too content to play follow the leader. This is not to mention the standard protagonist ‘won’t deal with threats because it’s wrong’ mentality. A Dragon, basically a god to these people, would have crushed the Winchesters without a second of hesitation. Is this the preservation of drama?

PublicLee Speaking

He hasn't been warned against trusting him, Jaune just knows Oz is a centuries-old chessmaster. Also, I think you're underestimating just how lost Jaune is. He has his fire, but until Oz showed him, he had no idea infused-items drew Grimm like mini-artifacts. He's also a young dragon, not an old, experienced, and arrogant Wyrm, so is still figuring things out. Lastly, you and I know the Brothers are real, but Jaune doesn't, and, other than Oz and Salem, no one on Remnant knows that either.

Alice

This chapter was a amazing read thanks for writing it, I'm 1 of those people who like tournament arcs to see the flashy new moves the protagonists get

MagisterdeVita

Jauncifer: what was that? Ozpin: that's Mr. Arc, is the right question.

Benjamin Lawton

I was actually expecting the "surprising discovery" to be something else – I am surprised by the fact that I am surprised by this.

daniel koval

Now that was some amazing characterization! I eagerly await more!