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The Pride Sauna- Comic (Patreon)

Published:
2023-09-08 22:34:39
Imported:
2023-09
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Anonymous

I love this comic! It's concise, but still gets the gaining action done in a really nice way. I am glad that you left the narration inserts in the comic. It's a very nice touch. I do have one critique: the narration would (in my opinion) work better and be less confusing if it were above the action in the panel rather than below it, since the actions they describe seem to precede the action in the main panels. Just a thought.

Chunk Cake Factory

Thank you for your comments, Feedback is definitely helpful and will be looking at doing more of that in the next comics.