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This story came out of an online chat. Now reading the chat again, there is still an opportunity to write a story closer to what we discussed.

josh:  The woman spent a good hour in the bar, finding the perfect match for what she had in mind. It was all about the thrill of completely destroying someone. To flex what she could do. To totally own the fate of some else. It was all about her.
1) Who would she be looking for?
2) Where would she end up with him (transformation wise)?

Catherine:  Hmm... "completely destroying someone" implies a major downgrade to me. But, I'd think she'd want him to still be attractive on some level, if erotic thrill is part of it. Maybe some kind of successful yuppie or high-status college student into a dumb lumbering behemoth.

josh:  Hm. Perhaps she wouldn't consider it "destroying". Dominate for sure.But in a permanent sense. To put someone in a different box, that they could never climb out of on their own.

Catherine:  Hmm. That opens up some other ideas.Shy but handsome guy into some kind of skater bro.

josh:  Maybe. I'm probably thinking an age bracket higher. Not many people in a bar would go as skater bro, unless you add age regression.

Catherine:  Sorry, college student problems. >.> My mind immediately jumped to a college bar.
Older, hm...

josh:  If it is a student bar there aren't that many yuppies.

Catherine:  You've never seen the MBAs. :P

josh: Ah.

Catherine:  Or law students. Law students are like clones.
Okay, so. Besides "dumb but sexy muscleman," what else would a late-20s or 30-something woman be interested in, to throw her power around...

josh:  It would be nice to find something more specific than just lumbering meathead. There are too many stories with just aimless gym-goers

Catherine:  The most common fetish for a 30-something woman would probs be Latin lover. But, that's not really a common submissive role, the whole point is that it's seductive. If anything it works better for a top.On the other hand, that + meathead/dumb produces a "workie"-type dynamic.

josh:  Yes, it should be someone she holds power over. Jiffy lube mechanic. Bin man.

Catherine:  Right. Someone she holds power over, who's still sexy. Construction worker.
Some beefy guy who works construction.

josh:  Hauling perhaps. Lots of lifting. No PhD required.

Catherine:   Perfect.

josh: It was Tuesday again. He knew Tuesdays. The bitch would call at 10 and ask for him. Then she would tell him to move the fucking crates from the attic to the basements and the ones from the basement to the attic. He had no idea what was in them. Something, clearly, as they weighed a ton, but there was no reason for them to switch place once a week. It was just an opportunity for her to check in on him. See that he looked trashy enough. Bulky enough. Make sure he hadn't left the hauler.

Catherine:  I like it. Although it sounds like he's 100% aware of her control over him, which makes me wonder why he doesn't just run or tell someone.

josh:  Tell them what? But yeah, that's where the balancing act comes in. I don't like stories where the subject is unaware. Then it is a victimless crime.

Catherine:  Hmm, interesting way of looking at it. I see it as even worse, because even the victim's memory has been messed with.
As for what to tell them, admittedly it's hard without looking crazy. :P
But, "so-and-so is a witch, you have to believe me," etc.

josh:  William Gibson had a hacker in one of his books who had crossed the mafia. They injected him with some engineered mold that ate away the parts of his brain that specifically made him good at what he did.

Catherine:  Kinda fun.

josh:  Keeping your memories may be worse than losing them.

Catherine:  In that case, definitely true.

josh:  I think another aspect of TF being done to someone unknown is the "senseless crime" aspect. It's like the morons who go out to beat up someone. They don't expect to see the victim ever again. So to hell with practicalities or aesthetics. Do what is most fun.

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