Comic-Pinwheel PG1 (Patreon)

I doodled this page yesterday after designing this character and decided to draw it today. Some of you may remember Bato from some earlier archaic sketchbook uploads. Thought I'd use him for this since he was already designed.

Please let me know how you think this turned out. Black and white is something I'm not super familiar with and I'm not sure how I feel about the rendered look just yet.