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Bomberninja

Very beautiful but one criticism, typos and misspelled. Sorry to be a grammer nazi but its just kind of distracting when I am reading the story. Other than that the art and actual story itself is fantastic 👍

TonkatsuCHAN

Sorry for the errors. Specially if it's typos. For grammatical mistakes and most spelling mistakes however, keep in mind that I'm french. English is not my first language. So I'm bound to make them sadly.

Bomberninja

Right you are Flashfire And its alright, I wasn't trying to be mean about it

TonkatsuCHAN

No no, I know. I didn't feel attacked or anything. I'm actually fully aware that my grammar and spellcheck sucks. it's a criticism I get a lot. I was just telling you that, unfortunately the grammar is due to me not being an English speaker and my spelling is due sever dyslexia (even if french, it s a big issue I have). I'm trying to avoid such mistakes but they will always happen sadly.

Bomberninja

Alright Keep up the great art and stories! Can't wait for more trap asylum uwu

Spicy-Tacos

To be like one of the posters in the story, I have to say that this was hot. Camie's end was so cruel and the bindings were simply wonderful. It was so great to see her locked away like that, and if she's going to be kept alive for her whole sentence, even better! By the way, since you're no longer doing the visual novel games, maybe you can use the old Tier 4 poll (with Juri, Cidney, and rest) to pick the character for the Tier 3 rewards like this one. That way, the Tier 4 patrons would be able to get a good reward since they can suggest the characters to be added to the poll that the Tier 3 patrons pick from.

TonkatsuCHAN

Not a bad idea. I m not going to do just a character selection poll (that I'll leave to the Tier 3) but I don't know if you noticed, but I'm doing polls based on specific themes: Like Best Jump suit girl, Special Best OC, Special best red head, Special best Video game female character.... Ect... To make it more fun. What I could do is make a poll of choosing between two themes like above for the Tier 4. And what ever wins becomes the theme for the Tier 3 poll. I can't just remove the current character selection poll from tier 3 because that would be a very dick move to them honestly. But I could let Tier 4 choose the Theme that will dictate the poll of characters in Tier 3. For Instance, next poll I might give you guys the choice between: red heads and Dark Skin girls. And also let you guys post in the comments your suggestion of characters that fit those criteria to be submitted to Tier3. That might be the best compromise.

Spicy-Tacos

That sounds like a good compromise. What I was suggesting was to make the old Tier 4 poll the new Tier 3 poll instead of doing the themed polls, and the Tier 4 patrons gets to suggest what character gets added to the poll when a character gets a set drawn for them. So next month, the Tier 3 patrons would vote between Juri, Cidney, Max, Chun-Li, Ferris, and a new character that replaces Carmilla. And the Tier 4 patrons get to suggest which character replaces Carmilla, and you choose one of them for the Tier 3 poll.

Anonymous

T'en fais pas Tonkatsu, le plus important c'est la compréhension surtout, même s'il y a quelques erreurs personnellement ça ne me gène pas :)