My Little Ventrue Pt.10 Ch.24 (Ch. 181) (Patreon)

This final chapter turned into one giant erotic experiment. How long can I make a sex scene? How ridiculous can it get? Don't bother reading it if you're not in the mood for porn, that's all it is besides the first 5%.

Ultimately I'm happy I did it, because now I know this is WAY too much. Descriptive sex scenes should not be this long. Maybe half this long, at most? It's an interesting problem, because writing the sex scene in chunks doesn't really let me know how too long it is until I edit it, and then it's too late to slash the length from like, 12k words of porn down to something more reasonable, like 5k. Lesson learned!

I'm also glad I wrote all this MLV sex before doing PoH, because PoH will try and be more impactful (ie: rare) with the long, pornographic sex scenes. I won't throw them in randomly (as often) like I did with MLV. I think it'll create a better balance.

There will likely be more MLV in the future. I'll be leaving it up to Tier 2+ patron votes on what sort of interlude content readers want. More MLV, more Pleasures of Hell, maybe some more 'An Inhuman Love' short stories, or a mix.

The next main series chapter release will be the first 'The Pleasures of Hell' chapter! While another 'A Taste of Hell' chapter will be coming in a couple days, those chapters are completely optional, and mostly just for fun. But PoH chapter 1 will be a much bigger, more serious deal, double length (so at least 28k words, doubling my new chapter minimum of 14k), so readers can get invested into the series from the getgo.

It's going to take time for me to solidify the plot into proper bullet points though, plus doubling the length is also a big delay. PoH chapter 1 will be coming sometime mid September, ideally the 15th.