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1-Videl discovers Gohan and Angela leaving the cinema:

Videl: 

I knew it! You have forced Gohan to have a date with you!

Get away from him, bitch!

If you get close to Gohan again, I'll kick you in the tits!

Angela: you are so rude! tomboy! butch!

You envy me because I have bigger tits than you!

Videl: Gohan and I have had a much deeper relationship for a long time.

You are nothing more than a second-hand slut.

Angela: Gohan how dare you?!

you are both horrible! buaaaaa


2- the next day at school, Gohan sees that Angela is flirting with another guy.

Angela: you're handsome. do you want to go out with me?

Gohan: looks like she's not angry anymore.

I'm glad to know that she's okay.

Videl: Hey Gohan, what are you doing here all alone?

Erasa: Why don't you come with us to the girls' bathroom?

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Christian Herrera

Here are some fixes i can see. The additional words are in ALL CAPS 1- Videl: I knew it! You have forced Gohan to have a date with you! Get away from him, YOU bitch! If you get close to Gohan again, I'll kick you in the tits! Angela: you are SUCH A RUDE BUTCH TOMBOY! You envy me because I have bigger tits than you! Videl: Gohan and I have a much deeper relationship for a long time. You are nothing more than a second-hand slut. Angela: Gohan! How dare you?! YOU TWO ARE horrible! buaaaaa 2- the next day at school, Gohan sees that Angela is flirting with another guy. Angela: HEY~ You're handsome. Want to go out with me? Gohan: Looks like she's not angry anymore. I'm glad to know that she's okay. Videl: Hey Gohan, what are you doing here all alone? Erasa: Why don't you come with us to the girls' bathroom?

Heyaheyaheya

Videl discovers Gohan and Angela leaving the cinema: Videl: I knew it! You must have forced Gohan to go on a date with you Get away from him, you bitch! If you come near Gohan again, I'll kick you in the tits! Angela: you're so rude! tomboy! butch! You envy me because I have bigger tits than you! Videl: Gohan and I have had a much deeper relationship for a long time. You're nothing more than a second-hand slut. Angela: Gohan how dare you?! you are both horrible! buaaaaa 2- the next day at school, Gohan sees that Angela is flirting with another guy. Angela: you're handsome. do you want to go out with me? Gohan: looks like she's not angry anymore. I'm glad to know that she's okay. Videl: Hey Gohan, what are you doing here all alone? Erasa: Why don't you come with us to the girls' bathroom?

Viken Urnoc

"You have forced Gohan to have a date with you!" = You have forced Gohan-kun to have date with you! "If you get close to Gohan again, I'll kick you in the tits!" = If you get close to Gohan-kun again, I'll kick you in the tits! "Gohan and I have had a much deeper relationship for a long time." Gohan-kun and I have had a much deeper relationship for a long time. "Gohan how dare you?!" Gohan-kun how dare you?! ... I feel sorry for Angela now... However, I'm glad Angela said "Tomboy" to Videl. That's exactly what I said on one of your lives, Yamamoto-san. ^ ^

Anonymous

1 "I knew it. You forced Gohan to date you" 2: personal change to make the sentence have more meaning " If you get close to Gohan again, I'LL KICK YOUR TITS OFF!" 3 "You're so annoying. Tomboy Bitch" 4: to shorten the sentence "Gohan and me were in a way nicer relationship"

Anonymous

I knew it! You must've forced Gohan-kun to go on a date with you Get away from him, you bitch! If you ever get close to Gohan-kun again, I'll kick you in the tits! you are SUCH A RUDE BUTCH TOMBOY! You are just jealous because my tits are bigger than yours! Gohan, How could you? Hey~ handsome. Want to go out with me? Looks like she is not angry anymore... I'm glad she´s ok.