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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-02 (Patreon)

Published:
2015-06-15 10:38:26
Edited:
2015-06-19 00:31:02
Imported:
2021-02

Content

"Gahhh!! That's kinda hurt. What wrong with va,....My d*ck!?..." - Aerial Ace

"Now you know how it hurt when somepony kick you in the nards." - Alternate Dawn


Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future


Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card


Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.


I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...

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Comments

Anonymous

There is no revision needed for the dialog in this chapter. Comment: noooooooo, curse youuuu yaoi fan girl

Anonymous

Oh I noticed there is some revision needed on the left panel eyebrow and the right panel eyes. By right it shouldn't show on the goggles as well, unless you're suggesting the goggles are transparent.

Anonymous

Another is probably the object order in the right panel. If the angle of the pose is seen as if we're at ground level. Then the... Stallionhood should be in front of her raised hoof which means only part of her raised hoof should be visible. This means that the object closer to us should hide / obscure the object behind it. Her raised hoof should also look more distinctive, as it is it looks more like a snowball floating near her Stallionhood. I feel oddly ridiculous writing constructive criticism like this, but hey it makes more sense that the plot line of the movie Jupiter ascending when I watched it in the cinema.

vavacung
>>572933

Sorry. I can't changed much without destroy the whole picture. But the end of her right front hoof really touch her new appeared at the moment. Since previous panel she move her hooves to touch it..////.