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"Sometime I hate how generosity I am. I can't refuse people who ask for help..." - Aerial Ace

Warning : This comic is alternate sequel  of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future

Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card

Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.

I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...

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Anonymous

I think you better get used to getting very few feedback in Patreon, since there's like 22 of us and thousands in Deviant to give feedback. But I will try to give feedback whenever possible in Patreon since I already do that in Deviantart. I have confidence in my english, I will help you if Dracoblair is squeamish with NSFW. Grammar-wise your dialog is correct. However there are better dialog to suit each character personality and speech. Here is my suggestion for this chapter. Ace: "Hey egghead! Owly said you needed my help?" Dawn: "Ah good you're here Ace, I wish to test this potion. Please drink what's in this vial"

Anonymous

For your reference, an example of what you are trying to make: <a href="http://m.hentai2read.com/rainbow_green_apple/1/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://m.hentai2read.com/rainbow_green_apple/1/</a>

vavacung

Actually. I use this as reference. <a href="http://g.e-hentai.org/g/689867/b9d6812215/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://g.e-hentai.org/g/689867/b9d6812215/</a>