Fembro: Chimalli(WIP) (Patreon)

I'm really not sure with this sketch. 

The idea behind this is Natisa(his concubine) coaxed him to try one of her dress. He reluctantly do so but find it arousing and get a huge boner. But I find the over all composition a bit boring and it doesn't convey the 'fembro' theme. I use this perspective because it make cock erection variant easier.

I think I need to take a step back and working on something else(Malida: Biceptember head swap idea) and come back later with a fresh idea.

What do you think?