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It's taken a while, and cut into my time on Magic, but here it is just in time for me to wish you all a Happy Thanksgiving! For those of you who celebrate it anyway. 

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Anonymous

Great chapter and happy holidays but did you have to leave the ending hanging off a cliff like that now I'm going to be anxious till the next update.

vimesenthusiast

... I had a joke with my editor about ending the chapter right after Asia's use of Fate's Overthrow. So it could have been worse. (evil smile)

Braeden1002

I both loved and hated this chapter. Moreover out of all of the different stories that you have written Akhenaten and Nefertiti have been my most hated and loved villains. When I look at the two of the them and you consider everything that they have done to get to this point you have to be impressed more so than Selene. But at the same time I hate them because of what they represent and the fact that they will continue to be a thorn in the side but they could also potentially be a rallying point for different groups to come together to deal with a common threat. In addition, in comparison to all off the different villains in your stories and in the Highschool DxD world they are probably the best and I love them as they have been the only ones that have survived and have a chance to be an issue later instead of being killed off. I also loved them as they did not brute force things they used cunning, intelligence, and guile to get to this point and win. I can even see them continuing this trend as they work to become the rulers of the world and force out those that they do not desire. But I loved this chapter for the growth that Harry undergoes so that he can stand closer to those that are actual Gods even starting the process in which he may become one as the Egyptians that survived could begin to, if not worship, at least acknowledge him. Plus if the spell that was used to cut off Egypt from the rest of the world does not drop Harry and company will be needed to allow them to live and begin recovering. I understand the need and it fits her character perfectly, but was disheartening to see Asia lose Twilight Healing. I know that her not having it will not change the way that she is loved nor can I see it stopping her from being a healer just how quick she will be able to heal them. It has been such an intrinsic part of her who she is and her character that it will be weird for her not to have it but it could also mean that Harry can bless or create something for her that would allow her to continue to heal or I could see Gabriel making an appearance due to this. But at the same time seeing her doing all she could to ease the suffering of those she has never meet fits her character completely and I would have been more annoyed that she did not do this now that I have seen that scene. With some of the people being revived does that mean that Irina, Xenovia and Dulio have been returned back to life? If so would that mean that they still retain their sacred gears and holy swords? I wonder what it would mean when they try to figure out what happen and then realize that them being alive and everything has been resolved by Harry and company.