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Just like it says on the tin folks.  Nothing else to see here.  If you're wondering about progress, FILFy is done and off to it's first editor, Nad Destroyer.  Making Waves is halfway done, and should be sent off to it's first editor Friday.

With that out of the way, let's get back to the reason for this post.

If you have been following me for any length of time, you know that while I excel (if I say so myself) at combat scenes, I struggle with political talk.  Especially if I want both sides to come off as intelligent.  However in several of my stories, political talk is looming in the future (No Detritus, I didn't call for you, go back in your corner).    

So I wanted to ask if anyone had any opinions or ideas of what the various upcoming political issues should include.


In Magic of the Force, we have Harry stepping into the Senate for the first time.

I need specific Senators- from this era - to do the talking for the Centrists.  I have several Senators in the Peace Faction and I have discovered the names of various senators I can use for the Separatist cause, but not the Centrist faction - specifically I need someone respected and not connected to the various amounts of corruption.  Someone who can be seen as a moral individual.  

I also need help on siting specific instances of the Senate actually solving problems both within the Senate and in the Republic as a whole.  I've only found examples of them screwing up or being manipulated into mistakes.

And finally, i would really like some help on what all four factions - peace first, the GDL, the Separatists, and the Centrists.  I can argue the GDL position, I can even argue the Separatist position somewhat, but coming up with things for the peace first and the Centrist position is hard without covering what I've already said in the fic.  But I want this scene to be powerful and show how all the positions have been staked out without becoming boring, so I can't just repeat myself.

Oh, I'd also like any laws or ordinances anyone can remember/have seen/heard mentioned that might be pertinent for this debate.  I have a few, but not many.



Next, this one is a little easier in Horse For the Force: As should be obvious from the last chapter, basically the clone wars have begun.  But I will need to show the debate about the Arming Act, and the discovery of the clone army.  

So, should I use Padme as a POV for that debate? - I haven't been using her AT ALL up to this point in this story. 

Further, what should the reactions of the Jedi be to the Clones in this work?  Ranma's not going to be part of that reaction right away, so I guess the question is has he changed Yoda and the others to the point where they will see the clones as what they are: a form of slavery?  Or will they decide to use the clone army as they did in the original?



This next one is about A Third Path, and has a simple question, but not a simple answer:  What should be done about Russia?  I have been hinting at the facts that not everyone in Russia was happy with the war, but was powerless to stop it, and I have already hinted at the fact Harry wouldn't be pushing for Russia to be broken up hugely.   He wants to turn the former enemy that is Russia into an ally, somewhat like how Japan was turned into an American ally after WW2.  But if that is the case, then what should happen to Russia?  What reparations, what bits should be ceded to their enemies, what bits should break off etc.  Please help.


Since these questions are so big, please answer each in a separate post.  If you can remember to put a header up to the question you're asking that would be a major help too.  And thank you in advance for giving me your opinions on these questions.  I know politics can be boring, but it is necessary at times.


Comments

Forgottenone

Horse in the force: To be honest in cannon they did not have a choice in the matter at all. Over the years the republic stripped their (defensive) military might to the dust for more bread and butter. When the clone wars broke out the republic need a army NOW, which they had in clones army's a jedi bought and made in secret. So what will the jedi order do fuss over the fact they did not at all order this army with money they never had but, magically payed for or come out swinging defending the republic from the massive droid armies? That not choice at all in the real world and why I stand by the fact that the jedi order had not choice at all. With your story lots and lots of little things have changed plus a few major and the jedi already have a hidden army with a fleet. More importantly they are not nodding along with the republic anymore. To be honest I say when the jedi find this out and bring up to the inner circle which will not be all jedi as they have a lot new allies thanks to you and they will share this info as soon as they get it. As not sharing key information in war is flat out backstabbing, I see a many issues raised 1) this is proof someone wants a long bloody war 2)This army will force the jedi into the war even if they did not want to get involved 3) This is a lead to who every is the mastermind of the whole war 4) They have to stop production of any more clones as I do not see any of the allied forces accepting continued production 5) They also must use said clones that are made so they do not fall into some other organization in the republic 6) Ranma found enough proof that the sith or at least a dark force user group running around jedi order could call in the fact that army of light need again so they do not have to sign the Arming Act that is very poorly written as they already have a very well defined rules with the army of light. ( I would have loved to see that come out in the movies) 7) Arming Act is not arming act in truth it is nothing more then stripping the senate power and the allies of the jedi should be screaming at them to stop it 8) Jedi can buy some time and stall the Arming Act as Yoda and many key leaders are not there and the fact the jedi are ready for war and separatist now know it not a easy win as they thought. This is also a part were Yoda can speak up in the public and unlike cannon not meekly go along. They real question is not so much what the light side going to do as it is the dark side faction going to do. If they want the grand plan to go off without more hitches they will need to move peons in a way that reveals them to the jedi and that part has flaws too. Well just my thought on the matter.

vimesenthusiast

Actually, the Republic could have started to train its own army during the crisis leading up to the war - they lacked the WILL to do so because Palpatine didn't want it to happen. Indeed, they could have actually relied on droids themselves - it wasn't as if they didn't know how to mass-produce them. Instead of having such a huge secret fleet as they did in canon (and here) they could have had a slightly smaller fleet but also a robot army of considerable size. Again, they didn't because Palpatine was playing both sides against one another. It's awfully easy to control the game when you are playing against yourself. I number 3 - Sifo Dias and Plagueis are both dead, and Sidious hasn't had anything to do with the cloning process since. 4 is going to be tricky as hell, but perhaps can be tied to 6 - however, the Army of Light was outlawed by the Ruusan Reformation - that would start another political fight. 7 - actually the Senate still had a lot of power well into the war, it was only in the last year of the war that the Emergency Powers Act and other such laws were created to give Palpatine more power to streamline the war efforts. But yes, Bulq is going to be forced to oust himself as a Sith, just to give the Jedi a target. so they stop looking for Sidious. Although if that works... heh... that would be telling.

Wrandral

Palpatine is never hurting for pawns to do his bidding or take the fall for him ^^.

Rumil's Apprentice

ATP The simplest reparation for Russia would be giving back all the territory it snapped up during the 20th century when they were being a very overt bully. Specially, Karelia from Finland, Königsberg (now Kaliningrad Oblast) from Germany, the Kuril Islands and southern Sakhalin from Japan, Tuva (previously governed by Mongolia and Manchu Empire), West Belarus and West Ukraine from Second Polish Republic, Ivangorod from Estonia, and the Pytalovsky District from Latvia (src https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Territorial_evolution_of_Russia#Soviet_Union and https://www.salon.com/2014/03/27/7_parts_of_russia_that_other_countries_could_call_theirs_partner/) You could have a UN or NATO oversight group that forces greater democracy and less crony-capitalism and corruption into the laws and governence. Also, Russia could easily be forced to join the EDF as a full number in exchange for continued existence as a nation-state on Earth.