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Howdy $10 donors! Please find attached a PDF with Parts 1 and 2 of the exclusive story.

So far no one has chimed in with any suggestions, so I pumped to breaks a little bit to allow more reader input before becoming completely beholden to a particular idea. I think you'll get some thoughts on where I intend to take things, but please comment below or use the more anonymous form linked in the PDF to let me know what you'd like to see!

Enjoy,

Dan

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Eric

Well if nothing else better is suggested the little bit I have jotted down so far is Donna suddenly finds her vision transforming into the scene of Monica breaking up with her, just a couple weeks before, and Kandi "transforming" into Monica as the scene replays itself. Monica is now once again calling her flat as a board and that her tongue game is non-existent. Those words had hurt Donna so much that she hadn't tried to hook up with anyone (previous flings or new targets) since. Donna's vision return's to normal just long enough to assure her that it was a vision and it wasn't actually Kandi saying those things, since she was wearing a confused expression and seemed to be trying to get Donna's attention, and then her vision shifts again and now she is Kandi and she is arguing with Sam, either most recent ex-boyfriend or one or two out, cause he wants to hit the back door again. She/Kandi is yelling at Sam that she doesn't normally have a problem with that kind of action, but three times in one week is too far. And then not only does the vision fade away, but Donna has the feeling that her "power " is fading away as well. (Because the bandanna helps to find the people you want to get vengeance with. Had she still been wearing it she could have mentally shifted through a list of people). That's All I have right now (and since I've got a head cold I doubt I'll be able to generate anything more).