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I wound up changing the title from the original plan. The "Father" title was a play on both an FMA reference and Paracelsus's title as "father of modern alchemy," but that didn't work with how little the chapter wound up focusing on him.

The ending sequence might get a few raised eyebrows, especially considering who else was on Team A and all of their malfunctions, but I think there would still be a mechanism in place for situations like this. Plus, it lets me play with some other stuff in the future, so I think it makes sense to have it there.

EDIT: Moving down all the way. 4/21/2024

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Gifted-Monster

I mean, Taylor has killed way more than Jack could manage in a millenia.

s22132

Be careful poking that bear, Andersen, lest you get bitten even worse. Though both he and Olga have a point that Taylor made an emotional decision based on her past. Still, they should look at it from the other side, that it's good that Taylor still has the emotions and empathy to be affected by something like that. No one can be completely logical and rational at all times, and if they can, they're likely a monster. People have feelings and emotions; while Taylor shouldn't be ruled by them, they're a part of what makes her human. And as you mentioned, considering the other members of Team A...yeah. I think another big reason for people making a fuss is both how infamous Jack the Ripper is, and that Jackie was literally trying to kill them minutes before. Yes, Mordred is also infamous, but she was introduced as an ally and is a more distant, historical/mythological character. Jack the Ripper is more recent and based on historical fact. Anyway, another good chapter, and I'm looking forward to/dreading parts of Taylor's past coming to light.