Visual novel WIP (Patreon)

So here is what I have so far. If you find anything to change or sugest, just tell me in the comments ^^ I just have to add some music and do the  third day to finish it, so I hope in the first weeks of December I can release it.

It is very simple, basicaly a monologue featuring one character growing. As the poll for his reaction was 50/50, he starts freaking out and at the end he is enjoying it .

I attached the file at this post, if you can't download it tell me and I will upload it another way.

EDIT: I think the problem of people that couldnt open it was for mac users, so I added the download file here