Revision Notes (Patreon)

I mentioned that I was considering revising the Idiot’s Reset chapter so that Logan doesn’t ‘lose,’ but it took me a few days to figure out how to do that without interfering with the AI minion reveal. I’ve changed the skill from a time loop ability to a foresight/future seeing ability.

All in all, I’m pleased with the new version! I’m quite excited about what Logan could do with the skill in the future! Read that revised version here which starts at Chapter 91: Iteration (https://www.patreon.com/posts/chapter-91-1-000-105111533) and goes to Chapter 92: The Man in Black (https://www.patreon.com/posts/chapter-92-man-105259592).

Also, I slightly revised the man in black and warrior against human scene which was important for my next revision note…

Asthea. By letting her go, Logan contradicted himself. He wasn’t being brutal and ruthless. He was being an idiot.

I thought about changing the chapter, so he just walks by Asthea, sees that she’s struggling, assumes that she’ll die and doesn’t help her… but that’s also short sighted. I had to get him to a place where he could be brutal, hence the adjusted human/warrior scene in Chapter 92: The Man in Black.

So sorry, Asthea! I had to kill you. ☹ The chapter ballooned in size, and I’ve now officially changed it into two chapters. Read the revised version here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/chapter-94-95-105606274