The day I meet you [Experimental W.I.P.] (Patreon)

Yes, as some of you might know, I do write music sometimes
Just not usually publish them. But here's one of the song that I made and is still working on for a few years.
Recently took me a few days to refine it again.
Was planning to make an Animated Music Video of our Aniversary (me and Nia) with this music long time ago but I haven't got so much time.
Anyway, Enjoy~ If any of you know about music or things like that, I would be very appreciated for some feed back and help~

And please don't publish this outside of Patreon

Lyric:

 Verse 1:
  -Before I met you, my life was empty.
And everyday was passing by all the same.
Before I met you, love was just a dream
    -The warmth in my heart has cooled down.
Needed a smile to warm it up everyday.
As I walk I saw my world was fading.
     -But there's always hope on these roads of darkness
The grey clouds drifted off, then a small light shown through.
And right in that moment i felt love
'Cause I meet you.

Chorus:
     -Just when I saw your smile, you stepped into my world
My heart felt like, being shot by the love arrows
Love your eyes ,love your lip and love your cuteness too
Always believe, always know that I belong to you
Take my heart, warm it up with the love within your soul
My whole world was turned upside down, and I knew
Just as I saw you, I felt it was meant to be
There was one thing that I could say at the time.
I fell in love with you.
    
Verse 2:
-Now all I can taste is this moment with you
You came to me and lightened up my whole world
With you beside me, it is breathtaking
    -You look great today. Oh, how did I know? 
Because you always look so great everyday. 
Just being with you, I feel so happy
    -When you are not with me, a piece of my heart is missing 
You, have become my whole world, I would be lost without you

Chorus:
    -Just when I saw your smile, you stepped into my world
My heart felt like, being shot by the love arrows
Love your eyes ,love your lip and love your cuteness too
Always believe, always know that I belong to you
Take my heart, warm it up with the love within your soul
My whole world was turned upside down, and I knew
Just as I saw you, I felt it was meant to be
There was one thing that I could say at the time.
Simply, that I love you

I fell in love with you.