Page 4 Sketch - Crys Comic (Patreon)

So, first off, not too happy with the little thought bubble on the 4th panel of this. I'm debating redoing the little composition there or just making that moment a complete page on it's own. I lean more towards making a page by itself for that after taking a look at it without the bubble. I feel like the version of the page without the thought bubble feels a lot more breathable / less claustrophobic.