Punk to Princess Part 4 Page 2 (Edited) (Patreon)

I got some really good advice from Shadow-Vivian

Decided to edit this page because of that advice.
I  like it waaaaay more. Hope you do to.

Wanted to share it to show that I learned some stuff. Also watched a bunch of YouTube videos on Comic paneling, but most of this page's fixes was because of Shadow-Vivian's advice. (I did write the dialog. It's the way it is because the character is the way it is.)

Hoping to use more of that advice in the future!