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<rubbershark> 7p (Patreon)

Published:
2021-09-26 23:51:09
Edited:
2021-09-27 02:05:55
Imported:
2021-09

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I'd appreciate any feedback on English translation!

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Anonymous

I'd recommend the following changes to dialogue: "Look how flat you've gotten." "I will make you regret it if you touch me!" "This will be your new home."

Anonymous

Some periods at the end of "how cute." and "that isn't going to happen." Would be good too