Swole Mates Page 02 (Inked) (Patreon)

Over the 2-week break in December, I tried my best to cover as much ground as possible with the ink phase for Meatier Showers 2022: Swole Mates. In the above last panel, Snares looks more like he'd picked up something foul smelling, especially from the look of shock from his eyes and the lack of color in the "scent trail" effect, making it hard to discern the nature of the smell.

Here is the cleaned up version with the last panel's expression revised. I think there's still room for improvement in terms of how readable it is. Like, it may actually be better if his eyes relaxed more as though he picked up a whiff of freshly baked muffins or something. For now, the page is at a "good enough" stage and I've since progressed onto the next page to keep the momentum going.

Let me know what you guys thinks! I will revisit this page at a later time.

Snares
Jan 2022