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First Person TG Sequence (Patreon)

Published:
2019-06-14 10:54:40
Edited:
2021-10-03 01:15:31
Imported:
2022-01

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Practicing my first person skills, I really want to do an anthology comic completely in first person but it’s so difficult to draw still!

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xxxixx2

This the last time I renew my subscription in your channel Amelia.

TGAmelia
>>23730799

I’m sorry to see you go, but I hope you have enjoyed some of my content whilst you pledged! So thanks for what you have pledged. I will still be releasing free content on my Deviant Art so I hope you check that out from time to time 😊

xxxixx2

I will subscribe again soon

Nathan Racher

My only criticism is the third panel. Because it seems that person has the ability to twist their neck like an owl. Which is amazing on it's own but it's also unrealistic and it took out the believabilty of the sequence.

TGAmelia
>>23731611

You know, I nearly didn’t post it because of that panel. I was really struggling to get the perspective right!

Perrin Rynning

Panel #3 might have worked better, in terms of composition, if you included a mirror. Or maybe showed the person using a smartphone to record their changes; they could have held the smartphone over their shoulder to get a look at their swelling 'caboose'.

Perrin Rynning

Overall, I have no objection to seeing your warm-ups and practice sketches, because I take it as a welcome reminder that no one is born a great artist. Thank you for sharing!

Melissa Brown

I love this. Experimental but oh so intriguing.