Ch4 Trimmings (Part 1) (Patreon)

I think I finally - FINALLY - finished the rewrite, and my gosh, it was worth every bit of trouble it gave me. You guys, I seriously can't wait for you to read it.

Here are some items from the script that didn't make the final cut. There are so many of them that I'll have to make another post for them. They might go up tomorrow.