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Wanted to know your guy's thoughts on if I were to do this.

As we all know, the Guild Master lived many years thinking he killed his grandfather through disappointment. That joke seems not to have landed with a lot of people and some people find it worse how I jokingly tried to tie Luxy into it.

I ws thinking of editing it into removing Luxy being at fault, and rather than disappointment it's that Grandpa was yelling so hard it led to a heart attack, or GM pushed him when he tried to stand up for himself and it triggered one.

While I won't change everything that doesn't land with some readers, this is one of the things I hear about the most so I figured I'd consider it and I'm leaning very heavily towards yes.