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Questions for you guys! Please answer! (Patreon)

Published:
2018-09-05 19:14:48
Imported:
2023-11

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Hey everyone, now that Adara's lewd scene is done I wanted some feedback on how I did with it! Do you guys have any comments on the overall quality of it? How do you feel it is compared to Tali's sex scene art wise and humor wise? I want everyone's honest thoughts on it, as this feedback is important. Do you like how I'm using sound effects more now? And how about the really poppy background colors, are they too distracting or do you like how colorful MHFAP! is becoming? Look back through Adara's sex scene if you have to but please make sure if you can you give me some feedback!

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Anonymous

I personally like the art style and overall theme of the story. I would like their to be more exposition. The background colors are a nice touch and should enhance the characters. The sound affects are nice as well. I would say keep the story on how it’s going and it’s something that you enjoy making. I also appreciate how the story gets updated quickly and with out too much of a wait time. I can’t wait to see how this story evolves in the future. Overall great job, keep it up and enjoy what you make.

mhfap
>>15268345

Thank you very much for all your kind words and more importantly the helpful feedback! By exposition do you mean wanting to know more about the lore and the world? Because like I answered Lanceblazer18 there will be plenty of that in the second half of the chapter. Right now I'm just setting things up and introducing bits and pieces about the world. What all did you want to know, though? Just lemme know and I'll make a mental note for potentially addressing these if I deem fit.

DM_5

I generally like your sex scenes, but you tend to draw too much fluid (saliva, tears, cum, etc.) for my tastes.

mhfap
>>15346625

Good to know. I’ve been trying to find the right balance with stuff and have been using all sorts of different brush combinations trying to find what works and I don’t think I’ve found it yet. Size and amount is one thing controlled by these experiments. Though I do admittedly like lots of cum, the rest has a high chance of decreasing from here as I continue to learn more and experiment.