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I’ve edited and rewritten large chunks of 62 and 65 so that Zoe’s budding sexuality is portrayed in a more palatable manner. I don’t expect to make big changes to the story I want to tell based solely on feedback very often, but this is a notable exception since I agreed with the people who felt it was somewhat off-putting and I thought I could do better.

If you were one of those people, I recommend rereading those chapters.

Ostensibly, the narrative is 100% the same and will follow the same ideas I had planned. It’s just the presentation is better now and Zoe is starting off at a higher level of sensitivity than ‘hardly any’. You can read more of my thought process in the notes I made in the individual chapters.