Slight Revisions Incoming (Patreon)

I’m still working on the next chapter but enough people have said something about it that I’m going to slightly revise 65 to make Zoe a little more into it. My intentions didn’t come through very well with the wording and I wrote it the way I did so that we’d get a bigger contrast with when she starts feeling more sexual, but it’s definitely not worth it if it alienates a few readers before that. I’ll be changing the wording so that she doesn’t feel ‘nothing’ and make it clearer that she’s into it on some level and that by the end she’s curious about more, but is still a little dismissive about it. Shouldn’t take me long to accomplish this, so I’ll probably do it after wrapping up next chapter.