NION COMIC CH1 RETRANSLATED!! (Patreon)

Well guys, to clarify, I don't speak English and I don't know the vocabulary of this one even without derivatives and I think that for some the English version of my comic is rubbish xd.

but I warn you that chapter 1 has already been retranslated, better dialogues, better coherence, better adapted for the English-speaking public.

I am grateful to the user GreyNimbus for a wonderful work

traslated by www.deviantart.com/greynimbus

that soon chapters 2 and 3 will be ready

link ch1
https://www.deviantart.com/nion-saiyan/gallery/89461153/nion-comic-english

thanks greinimbus for your work :)