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AIR ( PART 1 ) 

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Kelly Parks

I love the opening, especially from a screenwriter point of view. Deep space. A huge ship appears. We go inside and it seems abandoned. Stargate activates and a very confused soldier comes through, followed by a lot of other people. What a great hook! Of course you want to know what's going on. Such a great illustration of rule #1: Show don't tell.

Kevin Tipcorn

I'm only a few minutes in and I'm already getting a kick out of the reaction. All the stuff long time viewers took for granted, oh man. Going into it as someone who watched the film and 200+ episodes of TV it never occurred to me that there is so much going on that they don't have any chance to explain to new viewers. 7 chevron gate addresses are like phone numbers for planets made with symbols on the gate and dialling devices. The 8th chevron is like an international code for galaxies.