Liliana Vs Jazz: The Rookie (Patreon)
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Hey everyone!Today i wanna show you some advances in the new comic.
The title will be :"The Rookie". The reason for this title is because the main focus of the story will be Jazz perspective: Even she won her first fight for disqualification, she feels angry because the twins ruined her debut and did a joke of her, so for her next fight she demands a more "serious" rival, one that could really let her show her fight abilities and strengh, and that's when Liliana enters the scene not just to fight but to teach her a little bit of humbleness.
Also, as you can see, the girls will wear more elaborate clothing than the classic bikinis and as a last detail they will also be able to sweat in combat, something I've been trying to do for years but never managed to get it to work properly until now.
What do you think? I hope you are as excited as I am, I am currently working on the storyboard so hopefully I will have the first pages by saturday, will keep you update.