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sorry i didn't do any pages last week D: trying to catch up now :P


i might change the dialog a little..it just kinda feels weird..eventho thats kinda the point i maybe did not execute it very well ^^;  any suggestions? :P

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Mnemosyne

I guess I don't understand how he goes from "it's gross" to "come home with me." Otherwise the wording itself seems fine to me.

rukan kawayama

yeah i know ^^; thats kinda the point tho...he (nor seki) quite understands :P but i feel like i could have executed it better..

Kiyami

Hmm... what about changing the it's gross sentence to something like I don't get that. Unless he really is grossed by it.

rukan kawayama

he does think its gross, eventho he want to do all the gay stuff ..thats my problem :P it might sound weird but i actually know guys like this irl