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these are so late im sorry.. i keep getting stuck on panels in this scen, i think its because i changed it so much from the initial storyboard...ugh

the flow of this first page is a bit off.. first panel seki is face to face with yuki, then he has his head on his shoulder, then he is back being face to face.. feels weird to me.. do you get annoyed by stuff like that? i wanna change it but i dont have any mre time D:


anyway BUTT :3

btw there will be no finished pages today because i just finished these, but i will do one page for tomorrow! i always get a bit behind when i update Saturdays like i did last week.. my schedule is based on how much time it usually takes me to make pages after all D:

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LadyVonde

I think it's clear what's happening in the first few panels. Seki is about to melt onto Yuki with his little head to shoulder thing. Love it 😍🔥

Sandra

I think it flows just fine. I took his head turned to the side as a reaction to go with yuki fingering his ass.

rukan kawayama

thats what i was going for but i think maybe the first and last panels are a bit to similar and thats what's throwing me off? ugh idk D: im glad you like it tho <33