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My Crazy Growing Imouto (Patreon)

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2023-02-20 01:15:04
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This is my first new exclusive story setting since November :D Its going to replace the NNN series as my patreon exclusive story and going to have at least a second part. If you guys like this story then I could even make some more. So far I'm really happy with it the result. I tried some new techniques for this story aswell so editing this was a monster. Let me know what you think! Enjoy!

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Lexygts

Edit: I forgot to add the File xD Its there now... oof

AncientTreeLord38!

So far, the story seems interesting. I like the idea of her getting crazier as her confidence grows. Some suggestions: I suggest using darker lines for Layla's text. In some cases, it was hard to see what was written. Along with that, I suggest adding some time boxes indicating time has passed. You could add blank cut-away pages with just the text boxes there to give the idea of time has passed if you want. I recommend this because everything feels blurred together and it is hard to see whether we went forward or backward in time. Especially, the whole summer event. There is very little indication that summer is going by besides Ben's inner dialogue telling us, 'goodbye'. Thus, if you plan on utilizing more time skipping the future, I suggest adding in some weather, clothing, time of day, etc. Essentially background changes indicating time is moving forward.

CL16Fanboy23

Love this story. Really hope you continue it. I cant wait to see Layla's 'little' growth 😅!

Simpsons Reference

Getting some major Tall cousin by Honey Lounge vibes. Was that an inspiration?

Lexygts
>>102324888

I think it could have been, the idea just came by itself. Halfway into the making of this comic I realized that it had some strong parallels. Its actually my favorite hentai to this day so I can't rule it out. Still waiting for a sequel of that story!

Anonymous

So, everyone thinks they are siblings, so no one will question of they sleep in the same, if you know what I'm saying

John Howard

Will there be a height chart?

Lexygts
>>102566637

Ohh, I didn't think about that. I'll release one then alongside chapter 2.