(Feedback appreciated!) New TOI draft (Patreon)

Here's a draft for the next Things of Interest video on the Sunsoft Wide Boy screen magnifier! As TOI is a miniseries, I would like to try out different production styles for each episode, and this one in particular is an unscripted first impressions sort of video.

This section will be accompanied with further visual aids in the final render, but let me know what you think of the pacing and performance here. As an ESL speaker it is definitely a bit difficult for me to talk freely about a specific topic without occasionally stuttering or repeating myself, but I tried to cut that down as much as possible, and still want to see if an unscripted video is still a possible direction for some of the videos on my channel (as well as a way to train my English speaking. :P)

Your feedback is greatly appreciated, so let me know in this post or in the Discord server!