Feedback Form S3 A8 Segment 3 – About John (Patreon)


Strong agreement here, as always (so far). Therefore, nothing to worry about

I will say, at this point, that there is a Perk before the final fight (Silver Arcanist, I am pretty sure) where he takes a Companion Cube upgrade when there is an upgrade for Secret of Mana among the options. This is relevant because that would have substantially increased the power of the Overclock, which John would have known he was likely to use at that point.

That Perk selection needs to be adjusted, otherwise it’s a small plot hole, because John would have gone for the Secret of Mana upgrade. I am just the big lazy. It is a known issue.


Strong disagreement here, so also good. Nothing to say.


Again, good news here.


And still good news here.

To the comments.

Question: Any other thoughts on the protag?

Comment 1: His sexual preferences changed a lot. Just hope they don't change too much. For example, he got mad at Eliza for having oral sex with Scarlett for the first time when they met at the club (before Scarlett was integrated into the harem), but now he seems okay with Rave and Moira having 100 orgasms together, even expecting it. Sorry if I seem repetitive but this thing kind of bothers me.

Response 1: There were several reasons why he got annoyed with Eliza there. One was that he did not know Scarlett, so he was afraid there was an element of danger there. Secondly, he wanted that virginity for himself. Third, Eliza crumbled too easily. If he had known Scarlett at that time and had known what they were going to do, he wouldn’t have reacted that way.

Short segment here, but that’s not bad.