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Chapter 129 -The Weight of Loss Final (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-17 03:22:02
Edited:
2024-04-21 02:58:57
Imported:
2024-06

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Another long chapter which culminates Kase's POV.

I left Kase's line open, but I don't plan to return to Kase's POV like I have been doing until now. I will do his chapters sporadically, not affecting the weekly chapters of the original POV.

Comments

Tokk

I love your work, but this is easily your weakest chapter yet. 1. Kase is unchanged. He and his guild just got torn apart by the guy he has tormented since the beginning, Two guild members including the S class leader are dead and he is maimed but he takes it all in stride with not even batting an eye. 2. No consequences for Kase. So we now have the story out in public. With Syvis and Amelia both giving their sides of their stories against Kase. And he gets denied the leadership of his guild... that is all, never mind the entrapment he had Amelia, the death of civilians, and the death of fellow guild members he barely gets a slap on the wrist. 3. The new quest, this I think is the worse bit in here. Kase and Syvis whose affair was the direct cause of the recent troubles and may have just given their mortal enemies a being who can take out a guild by themselves are now going to be traveling together. Ok how can one thinks this is good idea. All in all it feels like you did too much to protect Kase for what really should have been a chapter of consequences.

The 1st Troll King

I’m hoping Kase can rebuild his relationship with Syvis during their trip together. I’m guessing Syvis is going to go stir crazy with Kase teasing her with him and Ilene constantly having sex in close proximity to her. I’d love to read those two whores come to terms with eachother as future wives. All leading up to them sharing and having a threesome with Kase.