Special comic (page 1) (Patreon)

Soooo... this is how it looks like. Certainly better than the Patron series from december, but sadly, not as good as a normal hentai manga. Still, given how small amount of time I have and what I am capable of, this, I think will do fine for the comic. I will only use yellow, grey and white colors, this will make it a bit easier for me.

But I'm curious what do YOU think? I know it's only one page so far, but I would appreciate feedback nonetheless :3