Next Comic Idea (Helluva Boss) (Patreon)

I've scripted the next comic idea but I feel like it could use some re-working. Maybe something funnier should be said or the characters should be doing something more?

What do you think?

"PG 1

Panel 1: Octavia, in her room, is sitting on her bed. She looks up when a voice calls out to her.

LOONA (off-panel): Alright, how do I look?

P2: Loona steps out, wearing clothes similar to Octavia's.

OCTAVIA: Whoa, you look wicked! 

LOONA: I hope I'm not stretching out your jacket.

P3: Octavia looks her over, squeezing her shoulders in support.

OCTAVIA: Hush now! You look phenomenal!

LOONA: Heh, alright... thanks.

P4: Loona gestures to the closet. Octavia looks a little nervous.

LOONA: Alright, now you try on my stuff.

OCTAVIA: Ah... right... sure...

PG 2

P1: Loona checks herself out in the mirror as Octavia gets dressed.

LOONA: Hey, you done changing yet?

OCTAVIA: Y-yeah...

LOONA: Well, let's take a look.

P2: Octavia steps out in Loona's clothes. She looks very uncomfortable.

LOONA: Whoa, look at this sexy mama. How do you like it?

OCTAVIA: I... I...

P3: Octavia tries to cover her exposed skin with her hands.

OCTAVIA: I feel so exposed! It's so revealing! How can you walk around in this?

P4: Octavia grabs at Loona, who has a concerned expression. 

OCTAVIA: It's not because you can't afford any more fabric, is it? Give me the number of your seamstress! I can buy you sleeves! As many sleeves as you want!

LOONA: Damn, girl, and I thought I was sheltered..."