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[EXCLUSIVE] [SPICY] 🌠🫦 Distracting Your Girl from Work | Fireplace SFX | Sweet | Neck Kisses | Pinning Down | Affection | Sub to Dom | F4A (Patreon)

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2023-03-19 22:13:52
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2024-04-03 15:02:43
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🔥 [EXCLUSIVE] [SPICY] [16:46] 🌠🫦 Distracting Your Girl from Work | Fireplace SFX | Sweet | Neck Kisses | Pinning Down | Affection | Sub to Dom | F4A 

Your girlfriend has been working on her laptop since forever and you are in need of a LOT of attention tonight. You keep telling her to take a much-needed break, but she refuses to budge... and that's when you decide to use your special skills to show her what exactly she's trying to resist here... 😏

Script by RayScriptWriter

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I'm super nervous for some reason 😅 Decided to try out a scripted one first to not overwhelm myself too much haha... hope you enjoy this one 🤞

If you'd like me to post a version with rain/thunder or no SFX at all, please let me know in the comments and I'll gladly do that for you 💛

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James Drake IX

Ooh. We're kicking up the spice from anaheim to jalapeno. Excellent. Since you used a prewritten script, I'm not going to comment on the content of the dialogue too much. I am going to say though, that I think it was a good idea to use a prewritten script to avoid being overwhelmed. I would also like to to encourage you to do so whenever you have a lot on your plate. We all love the Solar originals, but no one reasonable will be upset at you for using fillers to lighten the amount of work you need to do. I would like to give a big round of applause for your wonderful voice acting. This time there seemed to be more room for error than usual, at least to me. Places where small details of the voice might have made this less believable. But you did a stellar job, Solar. I was engaged the whole time. Okay. Now. *puts cloth padding over my Hammer of Truth* For the gentle bluntness. Please keep in mind that this is my personal opinion and other people might feel otherwise. On subsequent listens, I noticed that when you 'snap' and go from sub to Dom, it doesn't really feel like you're switching until a couple lines in. Your voice is still feels soft and playful/teasing, at first. Then a couple lines it I start feeling 'oh no, i pushed her too far' because your voice changes to be more authoritative. Which, normally would be fine, save for the insinuation by the character a few seconds earlier saying that she 'snapped', which to me implies a sudden shift in the dynamic. *rolls a die* Take 2 points of gentle bludgeoning damage. The audio was really good and that one little thing doesn't take away from the overall experience. I'm just being very nitpicky because there's nothing else wrong. (Also, this nitpick might just be a me thing, so please take it with a grain of salt.) Also, last point. I really like the addition of the fireplace crackling for several minutes after the talking stopped. I personally feel like it allows listeners to fall asleep while still feeling engrossed in the moment, but without worrying that they're going to miss any of your voice. And I would love a rain/thunderstorm version as well, if you would like to share one. Have a good day Solar!

solargirlasmr
>>104489772

Thank you for this amazing feedback, James! Your comments are always insightful, and I loved reading this one. Will definitely take notes on that detail you mentioned! And it looks like someone is familiar with a "sandwich" compliment-critique-compliment approach haha, thank you for that 😏💛

Lachlan Parker

I should, if I haven't already, tell you that I love Fdom speakers. Being teased like this and the thought of being pinned in this way both make me want to become a "good boy" for my "mommy". I never thought that I'd be either dominant or submissive, but I figured this out roughly a month ago. I'd melt at her touch, and end up begging with puppy dog eyes. Whether this would happen in real life or not, I don't know (I kinda hope so, which is so embarrassing 😰), but it's a fantasy that I adore a bit too much. Thank you for this. Even though I would enjoy a version where she didn't stop getting payback for another 5 or so minutes (1 of only two complaints, both minor), this was very very good. Just like the vast majority of your characters, as it turns out. If you have any more Fdom audios in mind (including non-spicy), please consider them slightly further.

solargirlasmr
>>108641139

Heyyy, please never feel embarrassed of the things that you would like to experience! As long as it’s not potentially hurting anyone else, I see absolutely nothing wrong in having such desires tbh 😌 we’re all different and want certain experiences in life, nothing to be ashamed of. And I will definitely create more audios with soft dom characters, especially since we are free to explore these scenarios here 😇✨