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Hooboy! This page, and to some extent, the next, is thoroughly kicking my ass, haha. I tried to cram too much into these two pages when it would have been better served with a little more breathing room. I'm not happy with the word balloon layouts/flow anywhere in this page in particular, but unfortunately deadlines don't care about my desire to scrap a page this late in the update week, so it's onto the inks we go. I'll pocket this as another lesson in pacing - 370 pages in and there's still plenty for me to learn, womp womp!  ┐(´-`)┌ 


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Allan Meyer

Love this world building. True, last panel is a little tight but rather have the exposition. That conversation with Al was a lot of pages ago so worth it.

Anonymous

I think the bunching of dialog bubbles adds to the atmosphere that theyre all a little on edge and talking over one another !