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Widow and Mei's Big Booty Play Part - 4 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-08-02 08:25:45
Imported:
2021-02

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That's one sickeningly ripe ass blast! The poor little mech is gonna burst if Widow and Mei keep filling it up with their rancid farts! However, their hopeless victim Dva is certainly going to be filtering the majority of their blasts through her nose and into her nightmares. Let the gassy, steam pressing, fart sauna begin!

I hope you all enjoy this one! Much like in Part 6 of the Twintelle comic, I made the "big blast" a full pager! Please let me hear your thoughts and criticisms on this comic! Let me know if you think I'm accentuating the butts too much or not including enough lewd details or facial expressions or any other ideas or suggestions you may have! Also thank you to all tier 3 and 4 patrons for baring with me, I will be following up this comic by completing all of your last month commissions as timely and thoroughly as I can manage to!

(All character rights go to Blizzard Entertainment)

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gunfu

Oh my goodness. You get better and better with each submission. But now that you mention it regarding details I do have some thoughts: 1. You should be accentuating the butts for this panel since what happens revolves around those 2 (or 4 if we're getting technical). However Mei does look a tad stretched/morphed compared to the rest of her body. 2. I never saw the Game Theory episode of how big D.Va's mech is, but I imagine it would be very cramped for 2 full grown women to fit. I feel they should be more squished together like sardines to our and their enjoyment. 3. Lewder details can be followed up on in the next page. Not sure what your story board looks like but I'd have the next page have a similar format to this one; have the booty sandwich still take up the majority of the center of the page but have the facial expressions of all three be zoomed in in bubbles like you do with varying expressions all the while having the two squish D.Va more between eachother more vigorously. 4. Lastly since you excell at the tiniest details and polish with characters and faces I wouldn't hide it. What I mean is I ADORE the looks on Widow and Mei but they are not necessisary... yet. Part 4 is where they start farting right? So to play to the size, power, and scale of their asses by only drawing their butts in a zoomed in view of whats happening to D.Va. Then in the next panel not only do you zoom out with the full body shot of the 2 revealing just how awful the hotbox got only after two farts but also play around with physical body language as well as orgasmic facial expressions. Since they're farting giants that should be the main focus. Although sealing up the mech in the corner? *chefs kiss* bravo. I don't want to tell you how to run your operation but this was just a few things I had in mind. And for what its worth, I LOVE that you draw everyone bottom heavy. Needed to be said so that the takeaway isn't that the issue with Mei wasn't the size of her butt, but rather the place mentioned and posture of her. I saw that you commented on this before my edit was done so I await the edit to your comment. I mean no disrespect or claim to know better, these are just merely opinions and suggestions. Keep up the good work ethic and thank you for keeping everyone in the loop as often as you do regarding updates. Much appreciated ❤

ourcouncil

Oh haha sorry ignor my last message, on my phone it only showed the first part of your message that said “oh my goodness” and I was confused lol but honestly thank you for such detailed feedback and suggestions! As far as the sizing of the mech and the butts go, it all sort of changes depending on the action I’m capturing. For example in this image the cockpit appears much bigger than it really is and how I’ve drawn it in previous parts, but that’s just so I can fit more detail of the bodies into the scene and give the viewer a sort of fish eye lens view of the scene. Changing the sizes also allows me to show widow and mei pressed up against the hull of the mech in a lewd fashion. So basically my size changes require a bit of suspension of disbelief for the sake of the scene, but honestly I agree that it would be a really good look to have their butts tightly compressed around dva inside the mech! I may return the scale of the woman and the mech to the real measurements in a future comic to show that sort of angle!

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