REVAMPED The Costume Shop Chapter 3: First Day Of Work (Patreon)

Here is the newly revised complete chapter of The Costume Shop Chapter 3. The main thing is the updated speech bubbled in white, with a more readable font, and some revised dialogue to match the overall story.

Osiris' expression is changed at the end to show he's fully lucid and consenting when he kisses Finn. Finn's bedroom is a bit more colorful, And Franklin looks a little bit more human and attractive than when I drew him more than 6 years ago.

I'll be moving on to Chapter 2 next, working backwards until every chapter is fully updated, then I'm going to do all the bonus comics too, with the eventual hope of doing a re-print of Season 1, and then a new Season 2 book containing Chapter 5, and all the bonus comics since 2017, which is going to easily match the same page count even though it has less story chapters.

Let me know what you think!