Picking up sleepdrifter again (Patreon)

Hi hi, I've been excited to pick this comic up again since i started wrapping up the previews one.
If you recall i had already sketched the first chapter sorta here:
https://imgur.com/a/PnzTSXV

I intend to do some modifications to the first few pages to make the narrative a bit more clear of where it is intending to go, but apart from that i feel like its solid enough to start lining the rest.
I'm sorry for the scuffedness of it all but thats how i start projects, im never sure on words and everything, I'll be sure to grab a better font for this time too and improve overall on everything i can.

The comic will be bigger although not incredibly so, I intended to do 3 "chapters" ,
the first one already being 13-15 pages depending on how it ends up if i feel like some dialogue needs more context.
I guess the question is how much do you want to know about the comic? Let me know in case, otherwise the plan is the same, sketch the whole thing throughout with text and dialogues defined so that it requires little modification, then lines, then colors.