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Here's a story: after working on this page for a long time and finishing in the late evening I exported it and put it in my storyboard finished as a miniature to see if it fits the other pages well. Then I realized there's a pretty big error in it.

I hope to get back to it later and fix it, but I just can't do it tonight or this weekend.
If you don't see it- the border dividing lower two frames is at such an angle, that it's lining up EXACTLY with Amanita's stomach and Aldona's ass in the first frame.
It's not a terrible mistake, but I'd rather get rid of it later by changing the angle of the border (but that requires some redrawing to do properly).

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Beredore2

Honestly, it's kind of a cool effect

ProfessorE

Dont stress yourself too much over little mistakes brother.

Jeremy

Ugh. I hate making/fixing accidental tangents/parallels like this. Not sure I would have noticed without you pointing it out, AND I don’t think it detracts in any way, but I understand you being unhappy with the composition.

Paqs

I still don't see it...

Daniel S

Is that a problem? I wouldn't have noticed it unless it was pointed out to me, and I still don't understand the significance

The14th

Obviously I don't know enough about comic layouts 'cus I don't know why that's a problem.

CrazyLace

I like how Amanita is going with the flow. Nissa is getting some quality gropes in there

Paqs

Aldona and Nissa are my two favs <3