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comic wip 1 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-06-24 01:24:05
Edited:
2019-06-24 01:55:22
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IT'S THAT TIME OF YEAR AGAIN FOLKS

funny how my last comic started with gardening and so does this one lol. anyway, very excited to announce i'm in the works with another mabel x apollo comic!

(no spoilers, but... it's gonna be a little more spicy than the last one... so yall got that to look forward to)

also, can you guys help me out a bit? do the top panels read correctly? i numbered them, but i've got my doubts about panel 4 that i didn't notice when i was thumbnailing lol. if it doesnt read properly im gonna have to move some stuff around. thanks yall! 

edit: ended up changing the format anyway!! 

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Fortress120

Where can I find your comics?

Anonymous

Ahhhh finallyyyy! Got my popcorn ready XD I'd say maybe switch panels 3 and 4 if anything? It might just be me though

Neronova

It begins! Look at that Fluffy boy

Straw

Oh gosh this is looking lovely. And I did read them in that order but I could see someone going from 1 to 4.

Richie-Rich

AHH IT BEGINS!! I can't wait to see more of this already, we're starting off great!! ✨ and the only thing I could see happening is someone going from panel 1 to 4 by accident

PrincessSamoyed

I'd say maybe the switch between 3 and 4 would be good but aside from that, everything looks good to me. Also Apollo's tail wag is adorbs!!!

M2

Best couple is back!! 😁

Nathan Smith

Looks amazing and I can't wait to see more of it. As for the top panels it is in a rather odd position in terms of eye movement. Naturally the eye would want to go in an upside-down N or Z pattern when reading the first four panels.

Rawk Manx

looking great so far!

IamUnknown

I read it 1-4-3-2, maybe swap where 4 and 3 are?

Whiffy Plush

I look forward to seeing more of these two. I've gotten a little attached to them! Numbers are looking great, by the way. Thank you so much for making this Cherri.

Perry Beans (edited)

Comment edits

2021-08-16 22:06:52 I think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3
2019-06-24 02:26:16 I think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3

I think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3

Furrygamer

Amazing work as always

Lupinator

Panel 1 is a POWERFUL pose.

Lictor000

Maybe you could had a little arrow to guide the reader through those panels if you want to keep the page composition