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I would appreciate your feedback on the composition of the image and the coloring. Im looking forward to improving for the project!

Hope you like the page!

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Nopast

Coloring's solid~

Karakuri

I think the front view of Caroline should be cropped to just her head, otherwise it looks like she's existing in two places at once. Other than that, awesome coloring and a good start to the comic.

plaga

I wanted to go for an artistic route with this page, but i could have done it a lot better. Probably it would be better to erase small pudding if it gets too confusing! Thank you a lot for the feedback c: