I want your input! (Kinktober Day 17: Competition) (Patreon)

I made this sketchsheet this morning for shits and giggles and ended up really liking it, and I want YOUR input before I begin editing/ changing things up to prepare for linework!

The main idea will stay the same, but seeing that I already plan on editing some faces/ changing dialogue I thought I'd ask you all your thoughts on what you'd like to see changed/ added! Let me know your thoughts below!