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Didn't get as far on colors before feeling the need to share it with you all this time. What do you think of of the *asterisk-ish thougth clouds? I kind of like how they stay in the background to the dialog, like thoughts are, but I'm not 100% on the furriness alone, maybe they should have a pale fill color so they pop out a liiiittle more? 🤔


Happy Tuesday, everyone! 💖

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Anonymous

I want to see what happen next 🖤

Anonymous

For the thoughts, maybe change the font a little? I like the porcupine bubbles tho, they're cute

wintonkidd

Porcupine bubbles is a way better name. Is that what they're called? I could probably handwrite that text and have it feel appropriate since it's more... Gushy and urgent usually. Maybe I'll give that a try later on and see how it feels. Thank you for the wise suggestion Sam! 🙏

Rico

That expression in the last part is so simple yet full of so many different emotions. You can feel the anxiety, the embarrassment, the slight shame in being caught. Chefs kiss 🤌🏽

Fuya

Holly looks so smug all the time, I love her. Poor Libby, that kind of panic is among the worst 😅 I think the thought bubbles would benefit from a slightly lighter background color.

Anonymous

I do like surprises 😁like these.

Wuff_Boman

Ohhh how I can't wait for the next pages 😍

wintonkidd

Hehe I like that you think she looks smug. I think Holly is that effortlessly good student that we all wish we were. 🥺

Fuya

Holly totally gives off that vibe, yes! I thought she's smug because she totally knows what Libby tries to hide under the last book which is why she left it there. Or maybe it's just Libby-scope - wishful thinking (GAY). Sorry, for whatever reason that really sticks with me from the preview pages 🫣

PAN

THE ✨TEASE✨

wintonkidd

heheeheee 🥰 I'm trying to expand my capacity for teasing with this work

Anonymous

Uh oh!

Anonymous

I think the asterisk clouds work well!